A Closer Look at Wal-Mart
A Closer Look at Wal-Mart
I arrived at the Keene Wal-Mart at approximately 2:00 pm on a Saturday. Edging my way slowly into the parking lot, it was clear to me that finding a spot to park my vehicle was going to be a chore in and of itself. As far as the eye could see, autos threatened to smother the asphalt expanse. Swarms of desperate drivers nervously patrolled each tightly-packed aisle in search of that ever-elusive vacant parking slot.
After approximately five minutes of circling the lot I began to grow frustrated, not so much with the unavailability of parking spots, rather more with the general selfishness and aggressiveness of my fellow Wal-Mart frequenters. At one point I was preparing to park when a young man in a large sport utility vehicle came lurching around the corner, eyeing first the vacant spot and then yours truly. As the man accelerated into the spot—my spot—I could clearly see, albeit briefly, the look of shame on his face. Clearly I had been the first to lay claim to the spot; however out of concern for the numerous plastic-bag-laden shoppers fanning out over the parking lot, I deemed it safest to proceed up the aisle at a slow speed. Alas, nice guys finish last.
Surely, nothing like this would happen out front of the general store in Stoddard, just down the road from where I live. There seems to be a high degree of anonymity and thus an absence of accountability in large numbers. I ended up parking at the very back of the lot next to a suspect, heavily-dented El Camino.
Three hundred yards later I entered Wal-Mart, at once receiving a cheery greeting from a kindly looking white-haired woman. I must warn the reader that although I am not a regular Wal-Mart shopper, I had, at the request of my grandfather, entered a Super Wal-Mart in Fort Myers, Florida some two weeks earlier in order to procure some Pepperidge Farm Turnovers and a few other miscellaneous items.Therefore, Wal-Mart was not uncharted territory, as it were. Yet I had never consciously observed the environment inside Wal-Mart with the critical eye of an enthusiastic young graduate student. Before me stood a giant expanse of some two hundred thousand square feet of shining splendor—racks and racks of clothing, stacks and stacks of display items, bicycles, bras, shotguns, diamonds, camcorders, TV dinners, notepads, toothbrushes…and countless other useful items.
As I made my way through the store in search of the items on my shopping list, many of the prejudices I had held up to that point slowly dissolved. “$3.94 for a 20-piece socket set,” I thought to myself, “how can I afford to pass that up?” Down each aisle were hundreds of other wonderful deals to be had. Spellbound, I continued my search, time and time again deviating from my original path after being sucked in by a variety of incredibly low prices.
Suddenly I realized what was happening to me. I had gone into the store an informed, conscientious, and somewhat disciplined consumer only to be overtaken by an intense desire to buy! Buy! Buy! What had happened to me? I hadn’t come here to buy anything—I didn’t need these things!
Continuing on my shopping spree, I began to feel dizzy. Whether it was the excess of fluorescent lighting, the poor air circulation, the pervasive bargain-hungry shoppers, or the sheer amount of stuff, I cannot be sure, but I knew that I needed to escape. Spying a sign for the restrooms on the eastern wall of the building, I made a run for it, dodging overwhelmed sales associates (earnestly trying to deal with the incessant barrage of demand-like questions posed by less-than-polite customers), and super-sized citizens pushing super-sized carts with screaming kids in tow.
Once in the quiet refuge of the men’s room I turned on the faucet and splashed some cold water on my face. “What is it about this place?” I asked myself. In years past trips to Wal-Mart meant a good time, yet now I was trapped in the men’s room, wiping the cold sweat from my forehead, terrified at the thought of emerging from this surprisingly-well-sanitized water closet. Knowing that I had some more investigative work to do, and (after a short pep-talk with myself) feeling somewhat fortified against the intoxicating marketing prowess of the Wal-Mart Corporation, I exited the lavatory and continued with my errands.
One of the first things that stood out to me after resuming my formal observation were the ubiquitous little (and not so little) signs advertising “everyday low prices” and “more for less.” Not only were these signs to be found up and down the aisles, but also in the middle of the wider lanes. Quite the assortment of goods was for sale on these centrally-placed racks and bins—something for everyone really.
As I came to the bottom of my shopping list I pondered all of the items written before me. This store truly carried everything! With clothing, hardware, home goods, office/school supply, electronics, toy, sporting goods, grocery, shoe, and jewelry departments, there really was not a little, but a lot of everything at Wal-Mart. Add the snack bar, bank and pharmacy and there’s not a lot that Wal-Mart doesn’t offer the consumer, aside from quality, non-mass-produced, locally made goods. Wal-Mart truly is the one-stop shopping center, and for many, there is no need to go elsewhere.
As I amassed a long list of product information I noticed an emerging trend: excluding the goods requiring minimal processing on my list, most everything originated in a far-off Asian country. “How is it,” I thought, “that anyone could make any money off of a pair of shoes that sold for $3.00, especially when they have traveled the 7,000 miles from China to New England?” This dilemma struck me with nearly every plastic item I observed.
I had checked off nearly all of the items on my list. The end was near; I could feel it. As I fastidiously studied the label on a large bottle of Tide laundry detergent I was suddenly disturbed by a droning voice blaring over the loudspeaker “Would a sales associate from Home Goods please dial 4-6-2.” And then “Security Check 1-1-4.” It was the latter of these two commands that put me on edge. I had, after all, heard some frightening stories about aggressive Wal-Mart security personnel. I looked skyward and spotted several black security bubbles eyeing me. Realizing that they had been watching me the whole time, all the while knowing that I was in the process of uncovering Wal-Mart’s insidious plan to take over small town America (and eventually the world), I began to feel uneasy once again. As I saw it, my only option was to cut my losses and avoid capture by casually making a break for the door before I could be intercepted by the security forces. I was nearly to the door when I was stopped in my tracks. However not by a security officer, but rather by an appallingly low price on a log of smokeless tobacco—not a bargain brand, the good stuff! Once again I weighed my options and deduced that I would forever look back upon this day with regret if I did not make the purchase. I hung my head in shame and joined the 12-shopper-long express line.
After about 15 minutes I made it to the front of the line. “Pretty busy today, isn’t it?” I remarked warmly to the cashier. “Yep,” she replied, uninterested. My second attempt at small talk didn’t even warrant a response.
I was five steps to freedom when the shrill cry of an alarm halted me in my tracks. “Son, step this way” commanded an older woman with a menacing look. “This is it,” I told myself, imagining the imminent electric shock torture that would no doubt take place in the “back room.” Much to my surprise I was cleared for takeoff after she looked at my receipt. She informed me that I had indeed paid for the goods in question after all. Thanks Betty.
I scurried out to my car, letting my guard down only when the door was locked. Mission Complete.
The thing about Wal-Mart is that it is a completely impersonal experience. All across the country, all across the world, these stores share the same layout, stock essentially the same goods, and follow the same business practices. The corporate executives obviously know nothing about where their goods come from, nor do they care; the price is right. Communities clearly mean nothing to Wal-Mart either, for what is to become of the many wonderful locally owned small businesses that cannot compete with the enormous purchasing power of the Wal-Mart Corporation? Low wages and no benefits to workers—how is this strengthening the community in any way?
If you go into the natural foods store in town you can easily learn where most all of the products originated and under what circumstances. At Wal-Mart this is not the case. In most cases consumers have very little to no idea of what these goods are made of and where they come from. This “big box” store mentality breeds this threatening kind of complacency and detachment from place. When I was in the Wal-Mart I did not feel as though I was in Keene, NH. I could have been anywhere in a number of different countries.
After this experience you can be sure that this consumer is no longer a “Wal-Mart Shopper.” Wal-Mart is more than a store—it’s a destroyer of community. With reprehensible corporate practices, impersonal service, and a shameless shopper-monitoring program, Wal-Mart is unworthy of anyone’s business.
I'm appalled by the fact that WalMart and really any discount store brings in products from out of the country that wouldn't pass muster if produced here. My family bought a jug of Hansen's apple juice last week and the manufacturing stamp on the side of the jug said "product of USA and/or China". Are they kidding? China as a source of perishable apple juice?
Sadly, with the state of the economy and the dwindling value of the dollar, many consumers are going to be left with WalMart as one of very few options to stretch their paycheck to support their family. Well, that short of learning how to use Craigslist and FreeCycle.
Hmm what a waste of time going to Wal Mart. I have been to these dumps in Taipei and of curse in China. Theyare very impersonal and once while being ion one in the states found them to be very disgusting, rude people, nothing good to buy and yet they are packed. We have a store that is similiar here in Zhengzhou with people smiling in every asile eager to help andmy Chinese is bad but they take the time to listen and help me find whatI want.
that was indeed a roller coaster ride! ++1
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That was some really enjoyable writing. And I can not agree more with the you! Walmart is a creepy place of home town destruction.... I would have to be dragged there to shop. And the one nearest my house isn't even as nice as you describe.
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Mr. E. Green:
I must tell you of the splendid job you did composing this piece. You get an A+ on your comp. Then, I must tell you that the way you described the scene in WM, the wonderful emotions you experienced at the goods on sale and the simultaneous fear that you were being watched and monitored was done with marvelous skill. You are very good at expressing yourself. In Australia, I believe, they would say, "Good on ya!" In the South part of the US, they would say, "Ya done good!" In any case, you get another A+ for the job you did.
Now, the other side of the coin. WM is not the same in all countries. In fact, the two or three WM stores here in Sao Paulo, Brasil stock almost nothing of the goods that a shopper can find in the state-side stores. And, the prices here are nothing like the ones you described. They are as exorbitant as the taxes the government levies upon the people of this beautiful country. No, Mr. Green, WM is NOT like it was in Pocatello Idaho where I spent almost six years, one day. I really wish it was; there are so many things I miss from the WM in Idaho.
One more thing: I agree with you about the impersonal service and experience you felt. I must add, however, that never stopped me from finding a bargain and buying what I needed, despite the impersonal personnel who couldn't care less that I was even in the store. I got what I needed and left a "happy camper."
Again, Sir, my complete compliments to your for a very well-done article.
zeke
I hate going to WalMart. But that is the only place I can make my dollar stretch. Too bad.
Low...low...prices will get you every time. Oh yeah, you'll be back. Where else can you get "ketchup" for $1.00 when the going price is $2.34 for the same size bottle? We try to stay away, however we all go back to Wal-Mart. --Great article +1.
I couldn't agree more with the sentiments expressed. I do my best to avoid our local Wal-Mart these days, but it's not always easy when you live in a fairly small town.
Boy, can I relate to the paragraph about parking at such discount centers. What really steams me is people who think nothing of holding up line of cars while they wait for someone to finish stuffing all their bargain treasures into their car, and pull out so they can get their spot. I sat behind some idiot for five minutes one day on my way out. I could strangle people like that.
Good article unfortunatelly this seems to be the place everyone gravitates towards. Its funny how one place can attract so many people even though others are selling the same products. The same seems to hold true for places like home depot and lowes, Which I hate but find sometimes you just have to go to.
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Truly enjoyed your article, very well written. Great imaging too, you pulled me right in with the "Swarms of desperate drivers..."
I must admit to being an occasional Walmart shopper, but I park far-far away from all those desperate drivers.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Jen
This is a very well-written article. I like your writing style and I agree with you on some of the things you say about Wal Mart.
In a lot of ways I think Wal-Mart hurts communities. The employees are treated like cattle and paid poorly. The company pushes down prices, sure, but that's not always a good thing. That means that companies need to meet walmart's prices to compete in retail. If they don't, they're out of luck because Wal-Mart is the largest store in the country. Having to meet Wal-Mart's prices forces companies to cut their labor and production costs.
The people who get hurt the most are the people who work behind the registers or stock the shelves. And the only way many of them can afford to eat and live is, you guessed it, by buying from Wal-Mart when their shift ends.
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Thanks everyone for the kind words regarding this short little essay...or whatever you want to call it. I had a good time writing it.
Sure, most of us end up at Wal-Mart for whatever reason, at least every now and then, and I'm in no way meaning to cast judgements about those who shop there. I just think it good to step back every now and then look at some of my life routines and think of the bigger implications.
Anyway, cheers to you all; keep on writing!
LOL...awesome write!!! Enjoyed the story, & giggled to the end. Sometimes my budget requires a trip to this place...never park out front, though--I always park at the back door by the auto parts (easy in/easy out)...anyway, the hair on the back of my neck always seems to rise to attention upon first embarkment onto that attrocious tiling...but now I'll think of your write-up & know I am not alone!!!
Good Journey!!!
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