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Eddie Van Halen’s Hollywood Hills property under gallons of mud

posted December 11, 2007 - 12:34pm
Eddie Van Halen’s Hollywood Hills property under gallons of mud

Eddie Van Halen’s Hollywood Hills property under gallons of mud

Eddie Van Halen’s house suffered serious damage on Monday. His pool is buried in mud, his driveway gate is down and major landscaping is going to be needed to restore his garden his Girlfriend, Janie Liszewski, said.< p>

Yesterday, a water main broke and sent thousands of gallons of mud and debris into his garden. Thanks to the firefighters who responded very quickly and threw down sandbags the damege was not as big as it could have been.

Eddie Van Halen and Janie Liszewski weren't at home when this happended.



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It's just a matter of finding a balance...

You didn't anything wrong with your writing; it's just that the title should accurately reflect the content of the article. Plus, in all honesty, inaccurate writing is a pet peeve of mine.

Sorry for the mistake

I just thought that a pool, the garden and driveway were part of a home, sorry for my mistake. I will change it. Watch movies and Sports Online for FREE http://freemovies-tv-sports.blogspot.com/

Eddie VH's pool

Right. From what I've read, his pool and backyard are ruined, but crews had put up sandbags to protect the home itself. Yes, it would be more accurate to indicate that the home wasn't ruined or flooded, but unfortunately that kind of attention to detail isn't seen often enough on Xomba. Seems like people are often in too much of a hurry to put keyword-laden posts online to really know the facts about what they're writing about.

So, it wasn't really his "home" that suffered damage...

This and other Xombytes that have been posted on this subject imply one thing (his house was flooded with or buried under mud) yet something else happened (his pool, yard, and driveway were flooded with mud). Wouldn't it be more correct to say "his property was flooded" or "his yard and landscaping were flooded"?

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