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First Haiku

posted August 16, 2006 - 6:33pm
First Haiku

Spring-

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hajimete wa
tada me wo ageta
waratteta

Summer-

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"hai!" egao
akarui hikari
"A..." sekimen

Fall-
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??????
?????

kuchidzuke to
masa ni hasaki de
te wa samui

Translations not in meter:

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As for the begninning
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I just lifted my eyes
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And laughed

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"Hi!" A smiling face
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A bright light
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"Aah.." a blush

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With a kiss
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At the very edge
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My hands are cold

Author: lettuchi
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Comments

Seventeen

Les Porter - Sun, 2006-12-11 12:39 pm
So what is magical about 17 and how did the tonal scale evolve and is this the only metre? I wish, too old, though, with not enough time to learn the elegant tongue.

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