First Haiku


First Haiku

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Spring-

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hajimete wa
tada me wo ageta
waratteta

Summer-

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"hai!" egao
akarui hikari
"A..." sekimen

Fall-
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kuchidzuke to
masa ni hasaki de
te wa samui

Translations not in meter:

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As for the begninning
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I just lifted my eyes
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And laughed

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"Hi!" A smiling face
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A bright light
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"Aah.." a blush

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With a kiss
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At the very edge
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My hands are cold



user-icon Submitted by lettuchi on Wed, 2006-08-16 18:33


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Seventeen

Submitted by Les Porter on Sun, 2006-11-12 12:39.

So what is magical about 17
and how did the tonal scale evolve
and is this the only metre?

I wish, too old, though,
with not enough time to learn
the elegant tongue.