These days I am considering  how to improve my English writing, although I have learnt it for a long time, I still find that I  have another long way to go. When I write an essay for my core seminar, I find that my statements are not coherent. Moreover, although I myself state a lot of suggestive ideas, their logics are not so close that my teacher suggests me to rethink and revise my writing.

I do not know what’s wrong, what I write is just to statement my points of view. Sometimes I should use some words and paraphrases to connect them together, however, I did not do that, which made my arguments so incoherent that teachers found them so hard to catch.

I have asked a teacher to recommend several books for me to improve my English writing level. And I will send emails to them soon, I guess they will recommend me several books for me, which I think will be very helpful for me.