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How to Tell Her, She's Your Heart's Desire

posted June 26, 2009 - 5:36pm
How to Tell Her, She's Your Heart's Desire





My Dearest "Corazon",


If I could speak to you in deepest honesty from the depths of my soul, to speak to you as if I knew you, to have no fear to share what I felt and even more accurately to dare to articulate the strange dance of exciting and wonderful emotions that flood my mind when I sat gazing upon your mere image!


I would tell you thus;


In the moments that I sat gazing upon your continence my pulse grew quick. My heart throbbed for you in deep dangerous beats. Pounding out it’s longing at the wonderment of what it would be to stare into your sensuous brown eyes in person.


The delicate structures of your perfect face, framed in flowing regal obsidian ribbons of luxurious hair send forth a torrent of passionate impulses racing across the very axioms of my rational mind!


Dizzy and breathless my gaze finally falls upon the delicate, inviting, curve of your neck. Drunk from passionate emotions, my mind floats adrift amongst a million thoughts, hopes, dreams and wishes churning within.


A hope against all hopes, my soul whispers shattering through the chaos “Is she the one?” Then a prayerful wish: “If only God would grace me with such a woman; so incredibly attractive and intelligent; to compliment my strengths and weaknesses. A woman to have, to hold and to love for a lifetime.


All of this from a few simple images of which do little justice to the complete representation of your person. Imagine how simply overwhelming it would be for an introvert such as myself to sit in the presence of one whom I behold to be so magnificent.


To be able to subconsciously soak in the tiniest nuances of your persona (the twinkle in your eyes, the rise and fall of your chest as you breathe, the corners of your mouth as you just begin to smile) reveling in all things that make you who you are. Cherishing each moment in your presence.


Let this letter stand testament to an honest, expression of my poetic LOVE. You truly are a striking inspiration.


All these things I would profess to you, if I could speak of the raw emotions I felt when I simply looked upon your photograph.



Epilogue


Although love is a popular topic that everyone wants, finding love is extremely difficult. Dating in today's era is more complex and at the same time more superficial than ever before making it nearly impossible to satisfy your heart's desire.


I wrote the above letter after viewing one woman's profile on an online dating site. I don't feel that way very often just looking at a picture but sometimes when I see a woman who is my type this is exactly how I feel. Sadly when those feelings come up, they usually deter me from even trying to talk to a woman. Mostly for fear of rejection. I can't wait until I find the real woman to whom this letter and these feelings belongs! 


So, maybe my poetic love letter will help inspire you when it comes to; "How to Tell Her She's Your Heart's Desire". Sometimes I enjoy the "Romance" of romance, kind of corny I know. I don't write love letters all that often. Especially just from looking at some beautiful stranger's picture.


This time it was a little different. I thought why not just get these feelings out and try to get to know them better. You know they say the definition of insanity is to repeat the same old process and hope for, or expect different results. That is just plain illogical and kind of crazy.

So, this time I chose to release the well of emotions and passion that threatens to drown me from within. I chose to explore those feelings rather than try to control them. It took quite a while to craft the words to accurately describe the feelings I get when I am exposed to certain types of beautiful women.


Actually it doesn't stop at lust for the beauty, for with that strong attraction to beauty the journey has only just begun. I have felt the same attraction when exposed to a few rare, amazing female personalities.


Truly it is better to Love and lose than never to Love at all.


FC4J



Comments

My heart throbbed for you in deep dangerous beats!

Thank you all so very much!

Joe Sadly, but not surprisingly this Love Letter was met with a curt yet kind rejection.

Rawnak Thank you for your encouragement. I have been an introvert for-ever! Been breaking free from it for years. Finally getting there.... So, you can expect more romantic themed writings as well as perhaps a bolder and more opinionated FC4J.

MJ Too true! I have never been into struting and showing off, or picking on weaker people. Machoism is lame. So, I will continue to reach out in love and kindness in as much as I can throughout all the parts of my life. Taprial Demotivational posters rock! One of my favorites happens to show about 8 dinner forks... You know, why don't I just put a picture of it here instead... :)

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Your point is well taken by the way, most beautiful women are ruined by how the world treats them. The world usually raises up beautiful spoiled brats with egos that can't cope with the normal life processes, like aging and the loss of beauty. Which usually sucks pretty bad for them, since many bounce along through life treating it like one long party and never bothering to get any technical skills.... (SO IF I AM GOING TO DATE A BOMBSHELL, I WILL HAVE A LOT TO SORT THROUGH BEFORE GETTING TO A GOOD ONE)

Mia Thank you so much for sharing an insight into your love story! :) Yes, I will continue to take risks and at the same time try to guard my heart from getting hardened.... Great advice!

MadelineSome very relevant and well spoken points! Thank you for commenting. I will be on guard against women who are "projecting" needs that I can not or will not fulfill, while I continue to be "open". ;)

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A few rare, amazing personalities, indeed...

Reading this makes me sigh for several reasons. What woman would not love to hear such sychophancy about her? It's passionate, honest, and immediate. :) What I like most, though, is the part about "a few rare, amazing personalities" causing a similar longing. Personally, I would much rather be coveted for my brains than my bosoms, but that would require much time to get to know me, and thus a man worthy of my precious time. ;) Instead of telling me how I make him "feel", I would prefer to see what I inspire him to do. People looking for love often end up projecting their own needs onto another person to fulfill. But in being a loving person instead, and giving your time to others - to listen, to understand, to be kind and thoughtful, to help, and even just to be present in the moment - can also create the same well of emotions that comes from a "dizzy and breathless" gaze upon external beauty. Exploring emotion is as important as maintaining a measure of control over it. Being shy and slow to reveal such feelings is a sign that perhaps her beauty is shallow and really only skin deep, because a truly beautiful woman would be appreciative and gentle with such feelings, even though she may not reciprocate. Keep your heart open as well as your eyes and one day she may realize you are one of those "rare, amazing personalities" as well. :)

@FC4J: Desire, love and jaw-droppin' lust

When I first saw my husband, desire flooded over me so much so that I had to stop walking and just stood there, looking at him. (I still hope my mouth wasn't hanging open as well). Desire developed in to full-blown lust and then quietly morphed in to love, love, love. I am very shy and had he not said something to me at that moment (it was probably what the heck is wrong with you? but I heard you are so beautiful} I would have never said anything and I would have let him walk right on by. My point being that I'm advising you to take a risk, all the while agreeing with you that dating is complex and superficial. But there's no other way to find out who was meant for you until you do! Phew. You wore me out today...must go get coffee refill. Peace, Mia NW

~Peace, Mia

Don't despair

I had once seen a demotivational poster( yes, those things do exist) It had a picture of a bombshell, I mean a hot sexy woman and the caption said, "No matter how beautiful and hot she looks right now, someone, somewhere has had enough of her" Bare Essentials

Aah, mi corazon es muy feliz

Aah, yes, my heart is very happy to read such beautiful words. Gave me chills too. I think many men would be amazed to know that machismo is not the way to a woman's heart, a woman really appreciates a man's ability to express love and kindness, which to me, is authentic masculinity. +1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 Sending Happy Thoughts and Smiles - MJ Avatar: Belief My journey for Balance Subscribe to MJ's Xombytes

Where has the romance gone?

OMG! FC4J This is absolutely a Kicker. Truly it is better to Love and lose than never to Love at all. You are sooooo right. What's the whole point of storing up all these beautiful romantic thoughts inside you man..? It's high time that you brought them all out...Wow. If I had not been married, I can assure you that I would have been bowled over by this "poetry"! I am sure you will find the woman of your dreams if you go on like this. "Are they crazy, NOT to like this?" +10000000000000000000000000000 The Arcade http://www.xomba.com/referral/77778

How to Tell Her, She's Your Heart's Desire

+1 Beauty is in your eye, as, the beholder. Let's hope you're her heart's desire too. http://www.Serve.gov "United We Serve!" Help build America's brand new century. It's your's and your children's century too. ↑ Grab this Headline Animator

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