It seems to me as a fan, but critic at the same time that the xomba.com lacks so many big points that the reader usually cannot have a choice for choosing the category they want. How can we select so many articles from the category and the tags? Does it really help? It seems to me that when we go to publish our book or anything we go to the critics and the editors, but for improving the website, we have just words of praising it. The critic can better serve and earn. This not a money machine, it needs something that all can read and use in the practical life.

If we are grown up we are still “Left Behind” as it same for the kinds, when it is NCLB (No Child Left Behind). Why do we submit article, while feeling that we should not be ‘Left Behind’. It is both our desire and need. The category needs greater and broader spectrum and the tags need more effectiveness. It seems possible by providing the options, so that new writers, for example the children need NCLB help from the websites like Xomba.com and the shvoong.com. We may ponder over the following formats:

Not to forget including that the children can surely the creative works and want explore more about it. Therefore, the patterns can be as:

Xomba.com>subject>theme>poem/story/skit (in a short form)

The subjects are many, which the present category does not show. The Math, Philosophy, and other subjects need the place these deserve in the categories.

Now the theme and subject is writer’s choice. Like for the theme of Fiction/non Fiction the topic for the skit can be for any desired audience or readers. Then a short skit can well follow it. The tags may include: kids, skits, studies, reading, habits, getting, good, grades, self, study, performance, creative arts, personality, development, home, making, school, teachers, parents, friends, and the endless tags relevant to the theme, subject, topic, title, content and the submitted article in the same flow.

We need to be critic, bitterer we are the sweeter results, and we can have. So, let us criticize creatively our friend, Xomba.com for Bitterness for Sweetness.