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My Apartment part 13

posted January 18, 2009 - 6:21pm
My Apartment part 13

Voice or no voice I had had enough for the night and decided to go to bed - I was exhausted. It was a restless sleep. I dreamed, on the edge of sleep and reality, of slaves screaming, having wood stuck up unmentionable places by some pilgrim looking girl. So, the next morning I was more tired than before I went to sleep.

It was a brand new day, I told myself, so I decided to get some housework done despite my weariness: first I cleaned about a week's worth of dishes (yeah, I'm a little lazy and a little disgusting); next I dusted the whole place and removed my sheets off my bed; with the sheets off, it was time to do some clothes. While the clothes were drying I decided to do a little vacuuming. When the vacuuming was done, I picked up the laundry; folded it and put it away. Now I was really tired, I could barely keep my eyes open.

Off to the couch I went for a midday siesta. I flipped on the TV to have some background noise (remember my neurosis). Again, I was fitful but I was not on that "edge of sleep and reality" like I was before. No, now I was in a deep sleep. In this dream, a vision of a beautiful black woman came to me. She whispered in my ear in an accent that sounded beautiful but I had no idea where it originated, that now I must be careful - things were getting more and more dangerous; that book brings about bad things and evil spirits - I must be on my guard. I asked her what happened to the slaves but she just shook her head and disappeared. I awoke with a start.

It was dark out and I was a little disorienated at first. Soon I got my bearings and decided that maybe I should go to bed. Even though I had slept roughly 4 hours by my estimate, I was still very tired. I shuffled off to bed. On my way past the second bedroom something caught my eye and I peered into the room. At first I could not figure out what had made me stop. Then I saw it - footprints...

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I envy anyone who can write fiction with relative ease

I have a hard time of that, for some reason. Keep up the good work!

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Actually I do both

Both Senior Year and A Life Worth Living I had on paper outlines and drafts. My Apartment, I see in my head and I'm trying to write it as fast as I see it. I do have a general idea where I'm going but not much more than that. With Becky, I wrote the intro years ago not much more than that. I have the manuscript sitting at home about a third of the way done so it is kinda inbetween the others. No not Becky Sharp (whoever that is). Read this http://www.xomba.com/my_secret and you'll get a good idea what becky is about. This was taken almost directly from the story. And lets just say that in the original it was not kisses that she needed. Visit my homepage here

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so you're making it up as you go, huh?

You're not one of those fiction writers who does extensive research and creates outlines of the plot before you even start. Me neither. Too anal. Becky, as in Becky Sharp?

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Novel?

No, its been done before.....Oh, you're talking about a book. Yes, yes hopefully. Like I said earlier A Life Worth Living is finished I just have to post it. My Apartment on the other hand was something that just grabbed me that I had to write right now. So, I know very little of where I'm taking this story - its a little exciting. Obviously, I am going to have to rework some of the stuff here but for the most part I am very very happy with it. And sometime I got to get to Becky - you think this story is a little perverse - Becky actually got me kicked off this site the first time I tried to post it. Visit my homepage here

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I'm hangin' in there

You're going to have an entire novel if you keep this up!

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toxic indeed!

Hopefully it gets you boiling or at least keeps you interested. Visit my homepage here

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this is getting pretty kinky

Sadism, sex, racism and religion are a toxic combo.

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I know

Those dishes were pretty damn scary by the time I go to them! Visit my homepage here

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The Scariest Thing

Oh no! Not the housework! Which reminds me... Nice cliffhanger there. I like. The Adventure Continues...Mythalia: A Paradise Under Siege

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