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For My Love

posted December 5, 2008 - 1:32pm
For My Love

As I sit alone and wonder what is going on,
so far away you're wondered leaving me alone.

Through the past 3 years I have been discreet and listened to you whine,
No I cant tell them about you it is just not the right time.

I have loved you with all my heart and have tried to understand,
but you have not given me the same you just cant stand up and be a man.

I know our cultures have stood the test of time,
but without anyone in the world knowing I exist I am loosing my mind.

Inside my heart cries out to you but you never listen to my cry's
Instead you tell me to wait and see and then tell me more lies.

I want to say to you my love and listen very well,
If you do not tell them then Ill be gone when back you dwell.

Patience they say is the best virtue but I can not listen more,
My heart is over flowing with pain and I must go through the door.

My love for you will never end, but no more can I await,
those lies and months and weeks and years are much too much too late.


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Romance Confuses Philosophy & Law

I sense that this poem is about the anguish of waiting for the man to take action; but a) it's impossible for him to take that action without a clear invitation, b) the clearest invitation steals the romance of 'him just knowing he's clear for landing,' yet c) a man acting on UNclear invitations risks punishment for the woman's regrets. (Forgive me for assuming the 'gender roles' there, but that's how FSM designed the world! lol) ---Uncle MythMan (http://www.geocities.com/jmythh2k5) & the Xombies Echo the Universe & GET MONEY for Discussing the Wonderful World Above & the Beauty Around Us!

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A forever

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