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Nonsense Verse

posted September 15, 2009 - 8:56pm
Nonsense Verse

Allow me to brief you about the story behind this poem. When I was in sixth grade, I spontaneously wrote this nonsense verse as an English Literature class work assignment. I was only eleven years old at the time. To my great surprise, my teacher was extremely impressed by my affinity with poetry and motivated me to become a poet. I have always been inclined towards serious writings, so this poem is different and special. Along with comic relief, this piece rings the bells of Nostalgia for me…


I hope you, as my readers, have a good laugh. Feel free to offer constructive criticism! :) Thank you!

 

I dreamt a dream while wide awake,

A hungry mouse was devouring a snake.

He said it was delicious, he said it was good,

He said it was the best of any food,

The mouse went to the doctor's where he saw a fatboyslim,

The hungry mouse killed the boy, then the boy killed him.

The mouse felt so sick that he sank into his liver,

And there he drowned in a very deep river.

 



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hey there:) thanks! glad you

hey there:) thanks! glad you like it. makes me laugh everytime :P i think i've come a long way since then though :P

 

 

Funny!

Funny!

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