Nonsense Verse
posted September 15, 2009 - 8:56pm Allow me to brief you about the story behind this poem. When I was in sixth grade, I spontaneously wrote this nonsense verse as an English Literature class work assignment. I was only eleven years old at the time. To my great surprise, my teacher was extremely impressed by my affinity with poetry and motivated me to become a poet. I have always been inclined towards serious writings, so this poem is different and special. Along with comic relief, this piece rings the bells of Nostalgia for me…
I hope you, as my readers, have a good laugh. Feel free to offer constructive criticism! :) Thank you!
I dreamt a dream while wide awake,
A hungry mouse was devouring a snake.
He said it was delicious, he said it was good,
He said it was the best of any food,
The mouse went to the doctor's where he saw a fatboyslim,
The hungry mouse killed the boy, then the boy killed him.
The mouse felt so sick that he sank into his liver,
And there he drowned in a very deep river.

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hey there:) thanks! glad you
hey there:) thanks! glad you like it. makes me laugh everytime :P i think i've come a long way since then though :P
Funny!
Funny!
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