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Please, Please! I’m Beggin’ Here

posted March 29, 2009 - 5:48pm
Please, Please! I’m Beggin’ Here

Your title caught my eye
I clicked on the link

But when the words are scrunched together
My eyes start to ache and blink

Reach for the mouse and click,
Your article I just missed

Can’t take the pain, the effort or the strain
Reading the words I must desist

Please, please! I’m beggin’ here
For a paragraph break

Hit that “enter” key two times
Break up those words, so my eyes do not ache

Please, please! I’m beggin’ here
I want to read what you write

So, please, please do not fear
The “enter” key will not bite

Just two presses with one finger
Votes and comments may come

With paragraph breaks
Your readers will linger

This is just a friendly reminder that paragraphs need to have blank spaces between them. This helps your readers read as well as your articles' appearance.

So, Please, please! I’m beggin’ here, write your words and use a paragraph break.

You too can earn money on Xomba!

MJ Dakota's Xombyte



Comments

YW

You're welcome, MJ. I got it from the movie 'Charly.' And while Cliff Robertson plays the part well, the book it is based on 'Flowers for Algernon' is much better. One of my all-time faves. (Though this little brain teaser is not included in the book.)

Dr. Suess Strikes again!

Actually, that is very true. A bit of a mind twister, but fun to ponder! Thanks for the comment. MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

That that is...

Lol. Ok, here it is: That that is, is. That that is not, is not. Is that it? It is! Cute huh? Can't take credit, though. I'm not that clever.

Nice test...

But I failed. MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

An Eyesight Test

thatthatisisthatthatisnotisnotisthatititis Add the appropriate punctuation to the above and it makes sense.

MJ Smiling @ Mr.X

Thank you for the editting. I will be reading it later. I am watching TV and browsing Xomba, but want to give your post my full attention. ; ) MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

guilty

Thank you simplelife

Thanks for the comment. I hope it helps writers to remember that extra enter key touch. : ) MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

Well said!

MJDakota --- great advice and so aptly written! Please visit www.simplelifecorp.com How to articles www.ehow.com/members/simplelife.html

Thank you Xomber

Appreciate your comment. MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

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