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The Pond

posted December 5, 2008 - 3:18pm
The Pond

Me and Timmy walk home together - he's my best friend. We have class together with Mrs. Most. He lives just down the street from me thats why we walk home together.

The other day we was walking home and decided to make plans to go fishing. I didn't want to go - I hate fishing. But, Timmy really wanted to go. He has this brand new boat he wanted to use. So I said OK and we decided to go on Saturday if our dads said it was ok - which they did.

So, then we had to decide which lake to go to. I got a really good idea and got excited about it. I told Timmy that there was a secret lake behind the orange groves on the way home. I wanted to go to that one. Timmy wanted to go Lago Vista but I begged and begged and he finally said yes.

So, Saturday comes and we start carrying the boat. The boat was really heavy - we had to stop a couple of times to rest. Finally, we get to the orange groves. It was really hard getting the boat thru groves - we had to go really low and Timmy wanted to quit but I wouldn't let him. Then we got to the lake.

It was awesome. It was a big lake - not as big as Lago Vista but pretty big. So we paddled out to the middle and started fishing. Fishing is boring so I wanted to go home after awhile. I begged Timmy to go home but he said no. He said that I made him carry the boat all the way to this lake he wasn't leaving until he caught a fish. Soon I started to get hungry and Timmy told me to shut-up. That made me mad.

I stood up and Timmy yelled at me that I was going to tip the boat over and to sit down. I told him to shut-up then he stood up. I pushed him in the water because he made me mad yelling at me. I looked for him in the water and he was yelling that I had to help him because he couldn't swim. I told him I couldn't because my mom had told me I can't going swimming with out a parent around. Then Timmy disappeared below the water. I waited and waited for him to come back but he didn't. Soon it got dark and the police came.

I was very, very scared. There were so many policemen. Timmy's mommy and daddy were crying and my mommy and daddy were crying. They said Timmy was never coming back. I told them he has to because he is my best friend.

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Oh... my... word... This story is so sad. It almost made me cry. Well written though.

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