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A Romantic Moment She Would Never Forget!

posted May 25, 2009 - 1:28am
A Romantic Moment She Would Never Forget!

A Romantic Moment She Would Never Forget!

She had been waiting in great anticipation for this moment. She hadn’t seen Him for a long time now and the thought that she would finally set her eyes on Him made her heart beat faster. She had accepted her friends’ invitation to this party only because she had anticipated Him on being there too.

She entered the room, where the party was going on, with her friends. She studied the room quietly and her eyes searched for Him. At first she was disappointed to find that He was not there, at least, not yet. Not wanting to attract attention to herself, she sat quietly with a drink in her hand in a corner of the room from where she could observe all that was going on.

Suddenly there was a sort of a commotion at the door and then she spotted Him. He was busy shaking hands and slapping everyone on their backs as greetings were exchanged. He didn’t notice her at first. But, she could see that His eyes were searching the room as if looking for someone.

His eyes finally found her. She looked at Him from across the room and just couldn’t take her eyes away. There he was at last, looking as handsome and dashing as ever. His soft brown eyes captivated her as she looked at them. She could see the intense longing and love in his eyes as He stood gazing at her. She dared not move, and not breathe afraid to break the romantic spell. He was awakening all kinds of emotions in her making her weak in her knees. He did not advance towards her, but kept looking silently and steadily at her with that intense expression.

Finally, the spell was broken. The host came and ushered Him towards her. At last, He was standing in front of her. He extended his hand and said, “Hello”.

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Glad it was "almost"

I'm glad you didn't delete it. : ) MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

Love Stories are Timeless!

You are right, Mia. I am a die hard romantic and love to read a good romance story any day. Thanks for your encouragement, it really means a lot, coming from you. Get money writing articles on Xomba Here

"Style and Class"

I am flattered! :-)) Thanks a ton MJ, You have boosted my morale. LOL, to think that I almost deleted this post after writing it! Get money writing articles on Xomba Here

Love stories

are timeless. You can never go wrong with a "weak in the knees" story! I think this is the second love/romantic story in the top posts this week (A New Day) which shows the popularity of well-written romance :) I'd like to see more fiction from you as well! :) Peace, Mia NW

~Peace, Mia

A romantic moment

Wow rawnak, talk about stepping out of your comfort zone with style and class! This is very nice indeed and I am looking forward to reading more. Take your time though, no pressure. : ) +1 MJ - Sending happy thoughts and Smiles! Avatar: Betrayal and Retribution http://www.valkyrieart.com/Poser1.html

I feel encouraged.

by your comments Grimes and Wdzz. Thank you so much. I really did not know where to go with this... I am glad that you liked it, although I feel that it is probably very "amateurish" kind of writing. I am really not used to writing fiction. Just trying my hand, now and then whenever I get an idea. Your encouragement means a lot to me. Maybe I will come up with some more "installments" although I don't think I can connect them all very well. So please bear with me! Get money writing articles on Xomba Here

Looking forward...

To another installment ...great story beginning. For more articles by this author click here

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That's some good writing. +1 Sherry Grimes

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