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screenplays are so damn difficult to write

posted October 12, 2006 - 9:24am
screenplays are so damn difficult to write

I graduated from Columbia University with a MFA in Film in 2005, and I still can't write a damn feature. While my concentration was directing - and I love directing - I always thought my first strength was writing and effortlessly moving from my imagination to words. Back in the day, I used to write a lot of poetry and plays. Five years later, I've really seen how good screenplays are pieces of filmic architecture.

Basically, if you don't build your script correctly, even the best director in the world can't save the movie. That's what the script ultimately is, it's the blueprint of the movie; it all starts there. I used to pride myself on my literary and artistic spontaneity. There was a time when all I had to do was pick up a pen and pad, or sit before my computer, and the words would come, the characters would speak. Alas, having grasped how fundamental structure is to a movie, I have shifted all my efforts to learning and applying the principles of dramatic structuring. And it's killed said spontaneity. As much as the reading's been fascinating too, it hasn't magically morphed me into a structure guru.

Basically, right now there is no magic. And that sucks. No magic means generally a fairly swift lapse into boredom and apathy. But I'm determined somehow to break through my aversion to clinically separating out the script's elements into clearly defined parts.

As a water sign, I'm much more inclined towards intuitively jumping in and writing characters and scenes - as some famous directors (e.g. Wong Kar-Wai, David Lynch) - get away with doing. However, given the current oppositions between Neptune (planet of dissolution, dreams, glamour, transcendence) with Saturn (planet of boundaries, strict limits, delays, and the material world) even watery people like me are having to succumb to harsh task-master Saturn. Heh, having some insight into astrology, archetypes, and myth gives you a very interesting cosmological perspective on everything. It's useful when learning elements of dramatic narrative too. Which brings me back to *sigh* structuring...



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That was a good move - thank you. Freedom of expression is paramount. Desire is the currency of the Universe.

Desire is the currency of the Universe.

Thank you for those

Thank you for those encouraging words and the genuine compassion with which you wrote them. Your advice was highly useful and much appreciated. May I also applaud you on your four scripts. I beg to differ on a number of points though: Firstly, contrary to what you may believe, very few can tell a decent story. 90 percent of what is coming out of Hollywood is soul-less shite. A good script - one worth investing so much money in to shoot - actually requires far more than an understanding of basic dramatic principles. It requires a profound grasp of universal human needs; it requires a clear message; it requires identifying which cinematic genre will most powerfully showcase your material. Unfortunately, most screenwriters fail to fulfill these criteria. And their number includes those employed by the big studios. Ultimately, it currently includes me, though I strive to rise to the challenge. My hope is to direct. My efforts to write at the moment are to serve that goal, not because I believe myself to be particularly gifted at screenwriting. Secondly, I never cited Columbia in an effort to show off, or as a "badge of honor." My point was that even a school with supposed prestige can fail to equip its graduates with automatic skill in screenwriting. Screenwriting is a difficult, rigorous pursuit, and I have great respect for those who not only "just do, just do, just do," but also do it *well*. Personally, I happen to think Columbia's film school is terrible for teaching screenwriting. Good thing you never went there. As for Syd Field, I have not only read his books, but I've heard him lecture in person. While he comes across as an intelligent, sympathetic person, his approach has not particularly helped me. Neither have the books of other gods from the screenwriting pantheon, Robert McKee, Linda Seger, Christopher Vogler et al. Right now, the only one I find truly helpful is John Truby. If you haven't already done so, perhaps you'd care to check out: www.truby.com. Then again, you probably don't need to, given your apparent mastery of the process. Desire is the currency of the Universe.

Desire is the currency of the Universe.

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Someone flagged this as offensive and I can't for the life of me figure out why. So I've cleared said tag. Good luck with the scriptwriting. I sure wish I was that type of creative. Poised Guru Xomba Moderator

Poised Guru
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GROW A PAIR BOY

I'm on my 4h script and as difficult as it is to get noticed, it is incredable how much of a wussy you sound like. COLUMBIA like it's a badge of honor. Anyone can write a good story kid. Structure is something you find out through research or trial and error or a good teacher. Don't ever giver up, but don't cry either. HOLLYWOOD WILL EAT UP THE WEAK. If you don't understand then ask someone, do the research, find out. SYD FIELD come to mind. DUH. quit weeping and tell a story. Your trying to do something that the rest of the world can't. If you cry your weak. JUST DO JUST DO JUST DO NO MAGIC - SHUT UP AND WRITE JUST DO JUST DO JUST DO

Man, that sucks

Sorry to hear about your difficulties. Keep at it, you'll get it eventually :).

re. Water Sign

Cryptic but intriguing comment. Does your watery nature incline you to shun anything to do with discrete, unambiguous forms? Conversely, does the intangible, ineffable intrigue you? *grin* actually if you're usually that cryptic, you might just be a Scorpio. In which case, you shouldn't worry. Other people will inevitably come into your path to do the disagreeable things for you. Which is fine... as long as one doesn't abuse the privilege! Desire is the currency of the Universe.

Desire is the currency of the Universe.

Water Sign

I'm a water sign. Which could explain something.

Jeremy Nettles
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