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The bewitched castle of San Antonio de Capriati.

posted August 24, 2008 - 6:09pm
The bewitched castle of San Antonio de Capriati.

To undersatand very well this short story, you have to bear in mind a world where we have many lives and where we forget lives as one goes along. Maybe, this is the way to not suffer and not endure suffer as if we had to remember each life of ours than we will have a lot of pain at the end.
Some ETs coming from another galaxy thought that the human being was undevelopped because he is just at his first life, and that if he had to come back to life, he will gain experience and begun like them to have the will to conquest the universe. Therefore, a strange desire of human destruction started in their minds. They wanted now more than never before to destroy a man. They have chosen the best man ever, a genius who appeared to them to be at the stone edge, a prodigy, a man who always shows himself the best in all disciplines. However, this man had the most beautiful love story of the world. His beloved one always marries him and when they die, they forget about each others and start back their new life as if they have never seen each others before. It is the best way to keep their love unfade, in his true colors as it was in the first day they met.
Nonetheless, the day war had to be declared to this genius who was called San Antonio de Capriati came through. He was very young on that day and he had to leave the beautiful castle he built to his wife with no offspring below him. Like all the braves, he kissed his woman goodbye and followed the ETs to the most disgusting adventure of his life. His name was not San Antonio anymore, he had been called "human" and all his memory was erased. The main objective of the ETs was to turn San Antonio into a commando who will fight for them in the Universe.
During that times and according to all the rumors his wife heard, one shocked her as somebody told her that the extraterrestriels think that the human being is living his first life. He had a strong doubt that this is her first life, and she begun praying the Lord to guide her thinkings. Suddenly, a strong wind blow in all the castle and she finally remembered all the time she had to go to the town hall with her beloved one. She married another man and had an offspring with him thinking her husband can come back this way. She way in fact right as when she died and forgot everything about everything, she came back to life afterward and met San Antonio. She fell in love with him as usual and she said that he is her beloved one. They got married but one day when they were trekking in the mountains, a castle appeared to them in the distance and they walked until they've reached it. The gate was wide open and it was all full of spider's webs and squelettons of dead cats. Bats were hanging in the roof and they both had a real emotion of fear. When they went out of it, they kept on ignoring that this castle was theirs and all pain was gone when she smiled and said:
-"We go back home?



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