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Tonight

posted October 22, 2008 - 12:31pm
Tonight

I have been racking my brains trying to think up a spooky topic…nothing comes to mind. More so, after reading all the excellent posts given so far.. Some inspiration…some inspiration… Let me admit that I am not a writer by natural instinct. I mean I cannot spin stories at the drop of a hat. Why, I cannot even make up a story for my 3 year old…he has to end all my stories himself! I am wandering from the topic now. Spooky Xomba. Why does nothing spooky ever happen to me? Why don’t I ever feel spooked? Always plain everyday things. Like, Its 1 am here. The World’s asleep, no noise, just the clock ticking away (what was that, I don’t even have a wall clock…),.. I can hear the rain drops (but, wasn’t it dry as a desert outside, when I went to close the door)…just everyday normal things…the water always gurgling from the cistern (I think the pipes run through the walls)…why, I cant even imagine shoes behind curtains, I have so little imagination …oh those black ugly ones are those my hubby always leaves behind…Now, did I lock the door, I always forget…I should get up and check…I need that coffee too to stay awake. Is that my hubby’s footsteps in the living room…He and the kids are sleeping in the big room out there…Maybe, he wants water. Wait, let me just finish this… Oh, the main door’s not locked – I forgot, I remember now… If a hand were to come behind me…now…as I got out of my cozy bed… a long snaky hand with long spindly fingers…that would be spooky! That doesn’t happen to me, nah, not, never…why is it so silent…when did the ticking stop? …Oh, I have to get up…but wasn’t it raining? Why is there no sound, NO sound at all…shit…the light had to trip now…who is there? …Bij, is that you? …oh you are here….hey take those hands away, I don’t think you have cut your nails for ages…nah KEEP YOUR HANDS OFF MY THROAT...AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH



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for a change? ;-)

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I've been busy studying :-(

I've been busy studying :-(

Thanks Ohau!

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I enjoyed that - thanks!

I enjoyed that - thanks!

thanks champagne

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Interesting

Enjoyed it.

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thanks for the cmment Rawnak

yeah...tough job making anything spooky! My writings here My profile here My Xomba blog

No Mortal that Whatup

Those fingers were definitely not mortal What-up! they were cold and lifeless - anyways I found the door locked...the footsteps - were just...smokescreen i guess...no humans there, I swear;-) Thanks for extension! My writings here My profile here My Xomba blog

Interesting read

yeah that made a very interesting read and wHATUP has made it complete with the "other side" story too. Sounds spooky enough now....:-))

From the other side

How long is she gonna be? The kids are asleep as well as her husband but it is she that I want. Let me just slide out from the bed and check...I bet she's still on that computer. I never should've have had that ex-large coffee. I thought it would help me stay up but now I have to go to the bathroom. Maybe I can just sneak down the hall way here and into the bathroom. Oh, yeah that feels better. I hope she can't hear it. Nope..she hasn't moved at all. Oh..I almost forgot let me put the timer on the fuses real quick so she won't have any lights later on. Ok back under the bed. I can't believe she left the door open. I waited a whole week for that. I was all set to pick the lock and Bam... door left open. Never look a gift horse in the mouth I always say. Ok here she comes to bed. There you go...it's sleepy time. Man, I need to cut my nails - oh, well maybe tomorrow. Hey, why's she getting out of bed? Well, here I go now or never.

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