1
vote

Unsaid: An Original Poem

posted October 4, 2009 - 8:49pm
Unsaid: An Original Poem

I wrote this poem back in 2001-2002 as a self-discovery piece and a chance to dig into my own psyche.  It is open to interpretation but when I wrote it I meant for it to reflect that introverted side of my personality and my reluctance to share too much about myself with those that I wasn't already close to.  I also wanted it to reflect the vulnerability that we all have when meeting and getting to know someone new. Unconsciously I think we all gauge what others might think of us depending on how much they learn about us or how much we reveal about our most personal selves.  I thought I'd share it since perhaps it might strike a chord with other people too.

 

Unsaid

 
Some things I cannot tell you
So much I hide Inside
The fear of closeness closes in
I’m scared
I’m open wide
 
You push and pull and drag Me out
Vulnerability is my sin
I want to shut away my Self
But cannot keep Me in
 
I ramble on of Me and Mine
And ask of You and Yours
Then feel a pulling back Inside
A slamming of my doors
 
Words…
Are mindless nothingness
Compared to how I Feel
I shut my mouth
Avert my eyes
There’s little more I’ll reveal
 
Silence
 
Fills the void instead
Some things are better left
Unsaid

 



Comments

Post new comment

  • Lines and paragraphs break automatically.
  • You can use BBCode tags in the text. URLs will automatically be converted to links.
  • Allowed HTML tags: <p> <br> <b> <a> <em> <strong> <cite> <code> <ul> <ol> <li> <dl> <dt> <dd> <img> <span> <object> <param> <embed> <table> <tr> <td> <div>
  • Web page addresses and e-mail addresses turn into links automatically.

More information about formatting options

Join Xomba Today

Do you like to write? Would you like to make a little extra money on the side? These people do. Join the Xomba community today.
Become a Member