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What we can affectionately call a poem

posted April 2, 2008 - 12:39am
What we can affectionately call a poem

What is a poem? When all words rhyme.
The word's have a message, when you
read all the lines. Some speak of the
future, others tell of the past.
The joys of being a winner, the pain
of being last. They make us often
wounder, sometimes they make us think.
At times they make us happy, and then
they say life stinks.Some can be sad
other's very happy indeed, some can
tell of reality or some can tell about
a dream. They can be written about
anything, we hold the pen in our hand.
But sometimes we have a writer's block,
and are thought's seem to have all ran.
So even though sometimes it can make us annoyed,
to read these word's of wisdom, which we
affectionately call a poem!


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Hey =)

Oh ok thank you!! :)) I didn't see that mistake until now, ill be sure to change that! :))) Thank you for reading it :))

~*~Bobby~*~

Hey

I liked this one, very nice, flowed well - only a couple of spelling mistakes - 'pen in are hand.' ....the 'are' should 'our' Otherwise, very nice ^_^

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