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WRITER PREYER

posted November 1, 2006 - 1:29am
WRITER PREYER

Yes I pry every day more ofthen then before since I started writing so well it all changed when I was in the hosptal that's where i found about my self more titles and names and about what I was in previeus life. Well you won't believ when i tell you i was nostradamus and some serbian ruler and now am immortal writer i wouledn't bite any one but if there is some vampires out there i sugest them they find something peacefulll to get a long with so the world can be safer place to live in it.

Author: Grbic Milan
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... But DO Recognize Where You're Faulty!

MythMan - Fri, 2007-19-1 12:36 am
What Les is saying is great and motivational; but look at what he's saying as both positive and negative. It's good that you started writing, that you know all the things you do about your past-lives `n` stuff. (I know ... I was all kinds of great people too ... or something like that.) But I learned that close to 90% of writing is rewriting. Really, getting your ideas down on paper any way you can is GOOD; but that might not be the same page you want to hand to a publisher. And typing all the words you think of on a word-document is great; but that doesn't mean you can select-all/copy/paste that document to the `Net and forget about it. You want to look at those words, remember what the document means to you, and make it mean the same thing to us ... for example: I am sure you mean "Writer's Prayer" in the title, but without reading the article it might mean 'the stalker of a writer.' What I'm saying is: EDIT! Write with Love ... That's me

I Know the challenges! Keep up the effort.

Les Porter - Tue, 2007-16-1 1:39 pm
I see remarkable progress in your efforts. Keep progressing! Keep the effort going! I think it is wonderful! Really!!! So don't worry too much about spelling, punctuation, syntax --structure -- just continue to express; continue the effort to communicate meaning. Use negative criticism to learn! Us positive criticism to encourage you on. You are doing well, and learning! Keep making the effort, keep trying the words to say what you want to say. Good Luck! Keep writing.

that editing was for free...

ptpenguin - Thu, 2006-2-11 2:41 pm
so he got what he paid for. Check out my Xombyte: Feed Burn and They will come. "Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference" <script src="

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thanks dude

Grbic Milan - Wed, 2006-1-11 9:06 pm
Milan Grbic

Milan Grbic

So the world can be "a"

cmofi - Wed, 2006-1-11 4:28 pm
So the world can be "a" safer place to live in. You miss that. Anyways ptpenguin, by the way "HI" ok, how did you get the box that has the details about your xonbytes?

Cecilia

With minimal editing....

ptpenguin - Wed, 2006-1-11 4:10 pm
Yes, I pray every day. More ofen often than before, since I started writing so well. It all changed when I was in the hospital. That's where I found about my self. I have more titles and names from a previous life. Well you won't believe it when I tell you I was Nostradamus and some a Serbian ruler and now an immortal writer. I wouldn’t bite any one, but if there is are some vampires out there, I suggest they find something peaceful to get along with so the world can be safer place to live in. See how correct spelling, some grammar help and spacing (hopefully) improve your short selection.

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come on pinguin .hahahaha

Grbic Milan - Wed, 2006-1-11 3:37 pm
Milan Grbic

Milan Grbic

dude

ptpenguin - Wed, 2006-1-11 11:00 am
Immortal Writer, please purchase a dictionary for spelling purposes. Next week we'll tackle run-on sentences. "Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference" <script src="

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